PRESENT IMPERFECT BY BIBLIO


Slash: Jack and Daniel involved in a loving and committed relationship, which usually involves sex.
Rating: PG-13
Category: Angst.  Poetry.
Season/Spoilers: Season 5.  "Meridian".
Synopsis: I haven't written a poem for 14 years.  I have no idea what constitutes a good poem, only when the words flow and are right.  "Meridian" inspired me to write this.  It's taken me from January until now to be able to share this with you at the JD_Divas site.
Warnings: "Meridian" hurt me.
Length: 12 Kb.


I have no centre
No faith
No choice
No chance

Tell them

You'll never make the leap
Never reach
I know that now
It's time

Jack?

Not my choice or yours
You can't take me on trust
You can't give me up
I can't go on

Please

My fault.  Always
Can't leave it alone
Can't leave you
Have to move on

Let me go

I can do more, be more
Give.  It's not about blame
It's not about me
But that, you know

Tell them

At the core, I failed
It isn't fair, but it's right
I just feel - without me
You can be more

Jack?

It's not an ending, Jack
Not a choice
My choice…is you
Always and only

Please

I failed, I'm not fine
And that's the truth
I cost too much
To be worth so little

Let me go

What you need, I need
Two halves of a whole
No life without you
No centre without me

Tell them to stop

It's hard, love.  I know

 
Respectfully, Biblio

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